alright, this is something that's been stuck in my head for a long while. It's not the kind of music I usually write (more of a bluesy folk) and I've only gotten one verse. Please feel free add in. I dont know the name of the chords. So when you see D, it's actually D without the middle finger on the e string. When you see C9, it's actually C9 with the e string open and the D string silent. When you see C9/B, it's actually C9 with instead of the 3'rd fret on the A string, it's the second, but the e is still open and the D is still silent.
D C9 C9/B D
Running away to--- night
Never said goo-----dbye
Sorry for the things I-----'ve done
but now it's ti-----me to run
I dont know if you guys are gonna catch any of this or not. Feel free to write another verse, chorus, bridge, intro, outro, whatever. BTW: this is capo'd at the 2nd fret.
Hm..try to tab it. For example:
e:--3
h:--3
g:--4
d:--5
a:--5
e:--3
for a g-major. I could barely imagine the problem..it´s 100% my fault
And a little bump.
D
e--0
b--3
g--2
d--0
a--0
e--x
C9
e--0
b--3
g--0
d--x
a--3
e--xC9/B
e--0
b--3
g--0
d--x
a--2
e--xalright, those are the chords.
No ideas for your lyrics...
But your D - I would call it Dsus2
and the C9/B - since there isn't a C in it, I think I would go with either G6/B ie Em7/B
my $0.02
Rick
wish i could tu-----rn back time
wish i could ju------st rewind
love me like you di-----d before
kept me coming back f-----or morebut now i cr----------y
and now i run away.......
now i kno-----------w
now i must just let go...........
leave me be--------
leave me to my own mistakes...
never forget me and the love we made......runaway
how's that fit...?!
Mike, you're a friggin genious!!!
I like the lyrics!
Hm..I would say that the D could also be a D9 and the other chords look ok for me^^
Great chords..looking foward to the whole song.
i can't remember lessons ... learned
so for my choices i have ..... burned
doesnt matter where i .... run
i cant escape the thing's i ..... 've done
before i make one more mi ..... stake
i'll try to make one more clean .............. break
and if i fail i'll know i've ... tried
to get it rigth before i've ...... died
Originally Posted by beandipMike, you're a friggin genious!!!
granted i don't have a guitar in front of me...but i kinda guessed at the notes and the tempo of the song...gotta admit...i was quot;feelingquot; it bro...i think it will be good...you should be able to finish it up from there!?
didn't really have a chord progression in mind for the little chorus...but i know you'll figure it out?!
maybe break into a mix of G Em and C...?
You guys rock. I've had this one little verse in my head forever, and I never could get something out of it. Now I've got that out of the way, I can sleep easy at night.
i'm liking a little break into something with Am, C/F, D/G, and something else i guess
- Nov 03 Thu 2011 21:08
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