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Read what I wrote about the song, I improvised the 3rd solo and on (the ssecond half of the song). Hope yuo guys njoyed it, I put some echo effect on the solos, it gave it a nice little touch, however it was program (Audacity) generated. All in all I'm pretty happy with the out come, also feel free to comment my tone on this song.
Here it is, enjoy:
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It wasnt bad but deffinatly needs alot of work theres way to much excess string noise during your soloing you really need to work on stopping this, as well as some timing and accuracy problems. As far as the tone i thought it was decent on the rythm and some of the leads but it was a little harsh during alot of the leads. Keep practicing though your pretty good for your age.

thanks, bump

You didn't say if you wanted criticism/feedback, so I'll tell you this:

One of my favourite 'tallica songs! Nice tone, sounds very true to the original.
Playing was a bit tentative; either use a compressor or play with more authority.

oh yeah hit me with the criticism/feedback, good or bad, and thanks twilight

dude..its all about the timing...the notes u hit are right. just work on hitting them well and getting them in time and ull be set.

like ^ he said the timing is just a little off, i kinda liked the first solo though, and your tone is sweet. keep it up

thanks