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Spent quite a long time on the production with this so criticism is greatly appreciated. emg 81 lowered in an epiphone sg into vamp for rhythm guitar. sd jb into vamp for the giant solo at the end. The short lead at the beginning was Tim- I think it was his tokai love rock into podxt. I'll be sending this off to Robert S. wednesday assuming there's still space left on the cd.

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*edit* here's a better mix I think
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Tim= Drums, vocals, lyrics, short lead near beginning
Me= Everything else

Lyrics:

There's a broken heart,
Lying on the pavement,
Left to perish on the street,
A sacrifice of love,

I'm lying down,
Filling my lungs,
I’m dreaming deeply,
The tears I've cried,
Have risen to the sun,

It is a ghost,
That’s come to meet me?
Flowing from the madness,
Disfiguring everyone,

Heaven's at bay,
Black and grey,
Leaving all denied,

I’ve stared into the void,
And it won’t deny me,
The only piece that fit,
Was in you residing,As tendrils consume me,
The spires of your love,
Are hollowed and shattered,
By the hardened skies above,

The blood is burning,
Through the street,
The flames engulf,
Your burning feet,

The devil reaches,
For the souls he has enslaved,

A lonely one admits defeat,
Surrendering to scorn,
An all-embracing enemy,
This foe cannot be fought,
Discriminating memories,
Antithesis of ecstasy,
Waiting for another conquest,
More hollow victories,

Hearts drown in din and deception,
Life is spiteful and wrong,
For one such as I with no beauty,
Now that your loving is gone,

I’d like to see you in denial,
So I can learn the method of your smile,
Burn your features,
Forget your grave,
Resurrect the ways of hate

Wicked man, Alittle sketchy at times. But I quite liked it.

you got a great singer there dude,

I thought it was really good, and really cool. Good job. Makes me feel a bit lazy for submiting a cover tune...but I was never much of a writer anyhow!

cheers guys! Thanks for the positive comments. I've actually remixed it with vocals upfront more and bass much more seperated from guitar frequency wise. Vocals and leads seemed severely lacking in speakers that don't have the mid spike mine seem to have. Hopefully it's for the better. Let me know what you think!

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eXCELLENT VOCALS.
IN PERFECT PITCH. GOOD tone and excellent way to place them in the music.
i give it a 10!
the distortion, its kinda grainny, but thats ok and the drums could be better too.
but the song structure itself is very good
the keybaords could have a more organic tone too
Hails
J.P

kinda a dream theater feel at 2:30 but it is a real tight mix

dude, you got some tight lyrics dude