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hey guys here's a song that i put together on my spare time let me know what u think.

from : localhost/www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=2560671amp;q=Lo

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from : localhost/www.soundclick.com/bands/4/on...rguy_music.htm

comments anyone??

Im just really leaning scales and lead now, so I may not be the right one to pass judgment but im impressed...the music type is not exactly my cup of tea but for what you are doingI think you are darn good...especially liked it when you slowed down at bout the 4 min mark for a bit more soul in you lead playing...nice work, at only 18 you are on your way to becoming a monster guitarist.

thanks for comment....after listening to it a few times after it was finished i realized that the arpeggio harmony part doesnt quite fit that well...and plus its a bit off time........this isnt my normal style for playing im usually doing hard rock stuff so this was kind of an adventure for me

Good playing, adrenaline song. I liked the tone although it could of done with a touch more clarity, bringing forward in the mix somewhat. A tweak of the EQ, it sounded a little bit distant, which is good but it was a little too distant. Needed more front end kick.

Overall top stuff enjoyed listening

Which is the new tune? I listened to starry night.. one of my favorite Satch tunes.. good job

Thanks for the input guys

Stevo the new tune is Mind Control

Cool song man, I enjoyed it.

Some of the harmonised parts were out of time though

pretty cool..some very cool ideas....a few timing issues, but sounds very cool...lead's pretty decent...

what kinda gear you using?